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Untitled 2 by ~Harli:iconHarli:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Fixed


Here I am, alone again,
A broken dream of now and then.
Music playing songs I know,
I try to stem the crying flow.
Lonely words that come from you,
But you're hiding feelings too.

There you are, lost again,
I can't believe I hurt you then.
I try to stop your frowning face,
I guess I'm just a dumb disgrace.
Empty lies that we all said,
Drifting through a muddled head.
©2008-2010 ~Harli
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Author's Comments

Ok, so this is yet another unfinished and unnamed one.

If you haven't already noticed, I do put most of my poems into a generic category, if you think it doesn't fit let me know and I'll move it :)

I promise I'll finish some of these one day. These are just random trains of thoughts from inside the library.

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~JesterxLady Jan 6, 2008, 4:32:07 PM
Oooooh. I like this one. It sort of gives me the feeling of two people breaking up from a relationship, and this being the thoughts of the person who ended it... I dunno. It's awesome. <3

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"The day you try to murder me is the day I commit suicide, just so when we're both in heaven I can shout 'hah, beat you too it again, sucker!'"~ JesterxLady, because it's always fun to talk about death.
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~Jylic Jan 7, 2008, 6:30:10 AM
I agree with JesterxLady on this... you seem to have a good nack of writing things that people can relate to... me included. Still good. ^^

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You can love them forever. You can love them when they don't. You can love all you want... but who will love you?
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~yourladyofsorrow Jan 7, 2008, 6:40:54 AM
i love how you make things rhyme..
it's beautiful and adds to the rhytmn..
simply amazing =]

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'Love me tenderly
While I rape your dignity'




~TheYoungPoet.
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~Harli Jan 7, 2008, 7:15:22 AM
Yeaaay. I love you Pug ^_^ Thanks for the comment, I miss last year. Talking about "black holes"

I dunno what I was thinking of when I wrote this but it's like...random feelings <3

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Harli - In the darkness there is light, in my cold heart there is still fight. Don't forget the pain I've given, one day soon, it will be re-written...
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~Harli Jan 7, 2008, 7:15:35 AM
Why thankoo Mr Christoff <3

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Harli - In the darkness there is light, in my cold heart there is still fight. Don't forget the pain I've given, one day soon, it will be re-written...
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~Harli Jan 7, 2008, 7:16:29 AM
Mhm, rhyming seems to be my poetry style, I always feel that when I write poems with a different structure, they somewhat lose the rhythm and the flow, so *shrugs*

But fanks sexy <3

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Harli - In the darkness there is light, in my cold heart there is still fight. Don't forget the pain I've given, one day soon, it will be re-written...
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~Jylic Jan 7, 2008, 7:44:01 AM
anytime ^^ <3

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You can love them forever. You can love them when they don't. You can love all you want... but who will love you?
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~JesterxLady Jan 7, 2008, 8:49:07 AM
Yes. Last year was very fun. =P Hehe.
Actually, I may not be going this year.... ;-;

Well, randomosity creates the best things then, doesn't it? =D It's still very awesome. I like it. <3

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"The day you try to murder me is the day I commit suicide, just so when we're both in heaven I can shout 'hah, beat you too it again, sucker!'"~ JesterxLady, because it's always fun to talk about death.
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~Harli Jan 7, 2008, 9:34:59 AM
:O Why not? And yeh it does, it rocks <3 Thanks lovey.

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Harli - In the darkness there is light, in my cold heart there is still fight. Don't forget the pain I've given, one day soon, it will be re-written...
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